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Submitted: October 10, 2005
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so, one more picture of my friend Eva... i like this one cause she looks so natural.... and i love her smile here...
i choose this cropping but don't know if it is not missing something now... what do you think about this one?
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~oriental-dragon:iconoriental-dragon: Oct 10, 2005, 5:08:38 PM
it does look very natural, and her smile is really genuine looking
i like the cropping, but i think maybe there's too much of her shirt showing and not enough of her head..or somehing...it seems like too much attention is focused on the shirt. I think maybe the text makes you focus on the shirt more than her face.
hope that helps.
~XJanca:iconXJanca: Oct 10, 2005, 10:57:30 PM
thanks a lot. your comments always help! I have some space for cropping here, but i thought this might be more interesting than to let all head.... i'll try to show a little more face and little less of the t-shirt and see if it is better.
Thanks once again! :-)
~Memno:iconMemno: Oct 10, 2005, 11:39:44 PM
Again, agree with oriental-dragon :).

Maybe one more note, do you have model-release? ;)

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~XJanca:iconXJanca: Oct 11, 2005, 12:12:30 AM
I know, i'll try different cropping and we'll see....but i wanted to put more focus on her smile and not on whole face....

for the note: i do :-D
~Memno:iconMemno: Oct 11, 2005, 5:36:55 AM
Agree with the smile, my previous note was about the text on t-shirt. IMHO it either should be in focus to be in balance with face or it should not be there at all

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~XJanca:iconXJanca: Oct 11, 2005, 7:02:32 AM
ok. understand now. I'll try it....good idea. Thanks a lot :-)
~cacoe:iconcacoe: Nov 2, 2005, 12:15:57 PM
its a nice portrait, it has a very spontanious feel. your friend reminds me of linda barker :|

i love prague! :o

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